Factions of a falling capital: temple brand, cistern, deed, remnant
GM extract: sanctuary fails in a different way than Joab’s altar. Here the building itself is the lie.
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I prep tables. Joab taught me sanctuary as a political object that fails at the horns. The Man Who Buried a City teaches the opposite problem: the holy building is up, and it still will not save you. That is a better ruling for a city game. The temple is a faction with a logo.
Set-pieces: the unheard word (social combat against a crowd), the cistern (vertical trap, mud as difficult terrain with a moral clock), the field deed during siege (players hate spending gold they cannot use yet), the ash walk, Egypt as a forced travel hook. Jeremiah is an NPC who will not shut up after the keep falls. I want that at my table.
Flavor-text test
Anathoth, Jerusalem, Babylon offstage, Egypt. Not generic-medieval. The remnant that asks for a word and rejects it is a faction I will name. Book Two is a different dungeon than Book One. Toolkit test passed. I borrowed it on KU. I will buy if I keep running the cistern. I will not run it as a joke. The Man Who Buried a City is not a joke about prophets.
After I closed it
Prep I wrote down: the holy building is a faction logo, not a save spell. If my table treats the temple as a +5 ward, I have misread The Man Who Buried a City. Jeremiah dies a long death of being unheard. The city dies faster. That is the extract.
I will run the cistern once. I will not run it as a joke. I will let a player buy a field they cannot occupy and see who understands. Toolkit test passed. Different dungeon than Joab. That is the only series promise I needed this week. The Man Who Buried a City earned the slot on my prep table next to Joab’s oak.
The Man Who Buried a City is Book Two of The Unsung: cistern, field, temple ash, a mouth the city could not grant. I am recording that so the next title on this desk has to be a different life. I will not run the cistern as comedy.